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Echoes. · 07-27-2008, 11:02 AM

comments?^^

Mimi · 07-27-2008, 12:03 PM

Ooooo, this one is very pretty, xcept that the blue bit draws the eyes too much instead of the render, other than that, love this, very nice

megamanst · 07-27-2008, 03:02 PM

i think its great except their seems to be a white edge on the left side im not sure if that was intentional or not

Axeguard · 07-27-2008, 09:44 PM

Neither of the light sources match the render, from the looks of the render the light source should be somewhere to the top-right. The current light sources take a lot away from the quality of the signature. I can't seem to find any flow in it either. Too much focus is taken from the focal due to the effects in the background.

Yaichi · 07-28-2008, 09:26 PM

Looks pretty cool, good job. ^_^

Naruto_da_hokage · 07-28-2008, 10:03 PM

very nice 9/10. Like mimi said, there is more attention drawn into the bg instead of the render. which is why the bg is so cool :P

beefjerky · 07-29-2008, 02:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Axeguard

Neither of the light sources match the render, from the looks of the render the light source should be somewhere to the top-right. The current light sources take a lot away from the quality of the signature. I can't seem to find any flow in it either. Too much focus is taken from the focal due to the effects in the background.

Yes, the light source should be coming from the top-right in fact.

The effects are kind of messy and cluttered, looks pretty neat though.
Work on composition, nice job.

Axeguard · 07-29-2008, 09:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Naruto_da_hokage

Like mimi said, there is more attention drawn into the bg instead of the render.

Who's mimi?

Quote:

Originally Posted by beefjerky

Yes, the light source should be coming from the top-right in fact.

Woot, someone agreed with me

______

AH, sry! Forgot to add my rating of the sig!

7/10 purely because of light source and flow.

Echoes. · 07-29-2008, 09:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by beefjerky

Yes, the light source should be coming from the top-right in fact.

I like it shiny :P

thx @ for the feedback

Princess Kenn · 07-29-2008, 12:43 PM

I think you should sharpen the render a little.

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Mimi The Sexiest Mod EVER! Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Sexy Land ~ Posts: 2,307 My Mood: Blog Entries: 1 Rep Power: 5 Credits: 14,124	Ooooo, this one is very pretty, xcept that the blue bit draws the eyes too much instead of the render, other than that, love this, very nice __________________ Ooooooo snapz [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]

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Axeguard Zone-Anime Animaniac - Level 5 Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 184 My Mood: Rep Power: 1 Credits: 2,323	Neither of the light sources match the render, from the looks of the render the light source should be somewhere to the top-right. The current light sources take a lot away from the quality of the signature. I can't seem to find any flow in it either. Too much focus is taken from the focal due to the effects in the background. __________________ If this world is a system created by God and moves only according to his will, I'll fucking rip that system apart. Last edited by Axeguard; 07-27-2008 at 09:47 PM.

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Yaichi Zone-Anime Child - Level 1 Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 1 Rep Power: 0 Credits: 36	Looks pretty cool, good job. ^_^

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